Continuing on with our 'magnetic' poetry exercise, we crafted a poem today about what it means to be a Sister, using the words from last week. Here it is:
Kindhearted, bold and loyal
Funtabulous
Compassionate
Wise girl
Loving honesty
Forever friendly
Sympathetic
United
Flabbergasted
Brave
Snazzy
And we decided to re-writed the nursery rhyme, 'What Are Little Girls Made Of.'
Sooooo....
What are GIRLS made of,
What are GIRLS made of,
COMPASSION and PERSONALITY
and everything _______________________,
That's what GIRLS are made of.
How would you fill in the blank???? Leave a comment!
5 comments:
Individuality!!!
That rhymes with personallity! :)
Little BABIES are made of love, and hope, and all things lost....
Like it? I was considering hope and dreams instead...?
And all things lost is all the dreams and kindness life takes away from you
Anon 2 again:
LITTLE girls are made of love and dreams and humanity.
I know I changed the beggining, and made it little girls, but....it just seemed to fit.
As for humanity, I wanted something that shows how girls have a LOT of flaws. If all girls were nice and everything, this sisterhood wouldn't exist.
i think everything with individuality and everything with originality would be good options.
I think, for the sake of the poem's flow, it would be nice to leave off "everything" in the last line if we use a word with more than 5 syllables...just a suggestion...
Versatility? (I think the others sounded better, actually...)
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